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From: clrclady
Date: Fri Mar 25 11:05:07 MST 2005
Subject: I love you uttered by a father

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Karen: Blecccccch (3/25/05)
KeithB: yep (3/27/05)

Patricia: but (3/28/05)

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Patricia: but (3/28/05)
KeithB: yep (3/27/05)
Karen: Blecccccch (3/25/05)

"I love you," uttered by a father
Throw me aside,
I feel the push
That always comes
With each neglectful act.
Why say it;
Why utter the words
That are empty,
Floating in space
With no end,
No beginning?
They mean nothing
Without action behind,
And your actions,
The opposite of the
Very words-
Death words
Ready to pierce.
They should be
Life words,
But they have
Become death to me
Because of your deeds.
No more words,
You have left me,
Called me a liar,
But I will live
Without you by my side.

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From: Karen
Date: Fri Mar 25 15:53:51 MST 2005
Subject: Blecccccch

Yeah, Cheryl, ouch.
The word "love" in English has too many meanings, some of them very slippery.

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From: KeithB
Date: Sun Mar 27 13:12:17 MST 2005
Subject: yep

"...and good riddance..." is all I can manage to think, I'm so angry. 20 years of good riddance, though, I must admit, has not satisfied me... I don't know what to say, Cheryl. I'm just angry.
Kb

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From: Patricia
Date: Mon Mar 28 13:25:03 MST 2005
Subject: but

you will live
you will live without him
with Him
you live
and you have life
you have love
and you are loved
this love needs no words
this love has hands
this love has arms
this love has feet
this love has warmth
this love has truth
no more lies
truth
light
love
freedom
life

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